UPDATE:

I've finished editing the new version of the video and I am very happy with it. Here is the new version of the JC Whitney Spring Auto Show Video.

Also, I initially had some color-correcting and exposure problems with my first run at editing the footage. But I eventually figured out how to tweak the colors and other parameters to get some great-looking footage.

I wrote up four blog posts on my experience working on this video; shooting, color correcting, editing, music selection. If you wanna check them out you can get some insight into what I, as a just-starting videographer, have been going through. Good times.

Post 1, Post 2, Post 3, and Post 4.