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Being Disjecta (short drama)
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A comic look at the trials of a nature filmmaker
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Duration:  00:04:29
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Size:  29.17MB
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Will Mahoney    April 27, 2008 10:55 AM
Great!
Man, what a good little short. Kudos to you, sir.

Mark Weiss    August 23, 2008 03:42 AM
That was REALLY entertaining! It tells a story, strips the glamour away in a humourous manner and is chock full of semi-climaxes only to be interrupted with comedic relief.
Surely, all of us struggling filmmakers can identify with the character here. 'Been there, done that, and had that done to me many times before. This video left me smiling, because it's like a page out of my diary.
This is one of the better indie videos I've seen. Kudos to you for creating something with story, flair and humour in it and for entertaining us. Truely a film for filmmakers!

Will Mahoney    August 25, 2008 08:07 AM
You know, I want to comment again. I saw this a while ago and wasn't feeling very wordy that day, but now that I've read Mark's comments and watched it again (plus months later in my videomaking career), I have some thoughts.

This was very good. It's a simple, well thought out short that really tells an entertaining story for anyone who wants to be a filmmaker. It's not all glitz and glamour. Usually it's moving forward, towards the goal. Putting all of these little pieces and snippets together to tell a story, that's filmmaking. Sometimes a bit of money and fame comes along, but not usually.

Anyways, this was a great short and it inspires me to make a good movie, but make sure that it is a good story first. Story, story, story.

Thanks for letting me watch.

Will



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