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Teaser Trailer for "Thunder Over Adams 2008"
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This is the Teaser trailer for "thunder over adams 2008" a firework show put on every year by a few locals.
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Updated:  5 months ago
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Duration:  00:02:37
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Size:  467.48MB
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Steven Dempsey    June 19, 2008 02:07 AM
I'm not sure if you did this for fun or not but I think your approach to this trailer could have been more effective.

The opening statements by the guy set the tone and that worked well but, instead of intercutting some footage to add impact to what he was saying, you chose multiple cross dissolve transitions which made everything drag. There was no pacing and the edits were too long. Even when you eventually got to the fireworks footage, it didn't feel like highlights but more like random clips selected and then pieced together. I think the piece would have really benefited from quicker cuts, less information and more exciting pacing to match the energy of the program itself.

Less is more. This could have been cut down to a killer 30 - 45 second tease. You've certainly got the assets to do it.



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